by Deborah Brooks-Langford
To you my love ON VALENTINES DAY
Her wings were no more
The life was gone of
Her loveliness
The memories of the ash sky
Was her corner of Eden?
But that didn’t say
Very much
On clouds of starry eyes
With a heart filled
With golden vessels
And a universe is woven
With a love divine
The stars of the land
Were gone
But the shadow of her wings
Flew on
She burned with passion
This night
With a tender majesty
In the darkness
The desire of her face
Told millions
She couldn’t help the feelings
Of wanting
But goodbye
You say to me?
No. I say I will not
The goodbyes are too
Long
The wings are still there
And my love still
So divine
So my love, please
I say
Maybe one day
Yours will be mine
Mine will be
The moment of the
Sweet moment
That we had that day
All I can say Happy Valentines
To you my love
©Copyright 2012 by POET DEBORAH BROOKS-LANGFORD
This is too all the lovers out there, missing their loves ones. HAPPY VALENTINES DAY TO YOU ALL:
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Hope you had a great St. Valentine's Day, especially after sharing that lovely poem with us all.
Happy Valentines Day Mr.s Brooks. Your Valentine thoughts of love , and romance are beyond words. God Bless You.
So very beautiful Debbie, happy valentine's day!
voting up, best wishes Lesley
Great job Debbie, very beautiful and well done. Extremely sensitive and telling of emotional ups and downs. I enjoyed very much. Happy Valentines Day to you and all out there. I voted UP,awesome, beautiful and interesting.
Good byes are truly too long... I hate good byes..
Happy Valentine's Deborah Brooks.. Wishing you lots of love and sweet music.. May your heart be filled with countless of joys..
I can ride this poem to anyone's heart :) Loved it
How beautiful, Deborah. Happy Valentine's Day to you.
Voted all the way UP.
Such a beautiful hub Debbie and as always accompanied by a beautiful song.
This says so much about you my friend and here's to so many more to share on here.
Take care and enjoy your day.
Eddy
What a wonderful way to say Valentine's Day! I hope these two are reunited someday in a future poem:) Voted up.
Happy Valentines Day Deborah! Really enjoyed the poem. I hope she finds her love!
Just lovely Debby. I hope you have a very Happy Valentine's Day. Maybe that unknown mysterious suitor will finally appear. I waited for him until I met my husband. lol
Your heart shows through in this one ~
this touches my heart this Valentines Day more than you will ever know ~
Thank you for sharing
Be blessed and Happy Valentines
Dreams and memories keep a person alive when hope is vanished. I suggest efforts to the hope alive with a perspective of the future.. any way, nice crafting of words..
Beautiful poem and what a lovely song (it brought tears to my eyes). I agree, good-byes are too long, let's just part and say "until we meet again". Great hub!
I am grateful that you love to share. What a beautiful flow of lovely words I am pleased that you are not bashful in showing your love , that others may understand that love is also truth.
Like God is love ad those who believes in him shares of that love and spreads that love.
Great work.
Bless Debbie!
Full of love and emotion..Love it..Happy Valentine Day Debbie...
aww...Debbie. It is a beautiful poem but I guess the desire to have her is causing pain.
Beautifully expressed!
Wishing you a beautiful Valentine, my friend!
This is so romantic -- a great gift for a Valentine. Voting this Up and Beautiful.
Love is in the air even when it is not reciprocated! Missing someone you love is very painful.
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